hi Bhavana

thanks for the encouraging words....

But what I feel is that I need to improve a lot in poetry... try finding some on-line workshop on poetry

regards,

yashasvi

whr had u beeen missin for these many daysss without any postsss,, Yashasvi... ???? n now come up wid sch nice marvels.. 
luvedd tis sweeeet poem... i thnkk i have read for d frst time a poem as a post here.. :-) u do justice to both short stories n poems... tatzzz truly art.. 
yeahhhh d hills n d clouds.. wowwww... tat itself is a treatttttttt... :-)

Clouds get scattered

Sun rays again Filtered

Rainbow Sprinkled

And now everywhere

Smiles twinkled


rgds
Bhavna

hi Bina ji,

welcome to my blogs...

Its so encouraging to see a blogger like you at my space.

I wish to get enlightened by your suggestion also.

regards

yashasvi

HI Raj ji,

I am so honoured and thankfully grateful to you for the efforts you are making to help me become a better writer.

Thank you Sir, I have noted your kind advice and shall try to follow that .... though I am not sure how I would do it, but I shall try it certainly.

These days finding some site for poetry workshops etc so that I become a better writer too....

Regards,

yashasvi

hi Komlet,

nature, and especially hills , have always been so close to my heart and mind since I came to my senses..... rather lost my senses while I was in love with hills..... they helped me socially as well as economically ( my first job was as a trecker...lolzz...)

Thanks for dropping by and giving me such beautiful comments,

I request for some more suggestions from your side

regards

yashasvi

hi Meera,

thanks for the encouraging words dear.

I wish to be enlightened with your suggestions, as I feel that I need much more to learn about poems and poetry

as I learnt to write prose on this site, I think I would be able to learn this art too at sullekha with the help of my friends here.

yashasvi

yashasvi
nice flight of fancy

Hi WL Mom,

thanks for your ever encouraging comments....... 

Regards,

yashasvi

hi Priym,

thanks for your kind words buddy.

I am glad you liked it and wish more suggestions from you 

best regards

yashasvi

HI Yash ji,

I was busy due to excessive travelling last week  or so....

just tried my hand and mind to write and rhyme my words.....

I would love to have suggestions from you in this poem too.

Yashasvi