Intermingled thoughts Entwined feelings
Flowed thru locked lips and pressing bodies
The breath warmed others shoulders and neck
The feelings so hot and erotic divulged the love
Heart throbbed and the nerves burned with desire
Neither the breeze nor the dew drops cooled them off
Rain drops ignited the lava and they entered others being
Entering the soul, satiating the mind, soothing the heart
Transacting love and feeling attached, related and glued
Caressing the backs, hands exploring the depths
Both drowned in feeling others pulsating heart
The closer they came, greater became the thirst
Tighter became the grip, more lost they were
Gleefully gliding in the air, free and yet attached
Combining eroticism and romanticism with feelings
They soared thru the most sublime yet sinful pleasures
The nectar of love permeating thru their mind and souls
Making them one, united and submitted mutually
Bowing before what the nature intended them to be
Feeling sanctified, pure and clean, blessed and benedicted
With choicest charms and cheers, they drifted away
With a promise to meet again for their ethereal unification
Close
hi Ajit Nambiar,
I am glad you visited the blog and encouraged me .....
Thanks buddy for your wishes...... I have learnt a lot since I came here..... an dam still learning from the skills of your writings......
regards
yashasvi
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such wonderful poem .I am not sure how I missed it ...............you desreved it man............
congrats
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hi Aruna,
thanks dear for your wishes
yashasvi
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hi Lakshmi Mukundan
thanks for your encouraging words....
thanks for your wishes......
regards,
yashasvi
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yashasvi
Passionate and expressive poem........all the best for the contest
LM
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wow Sophie...
great to see you on my blogs again
thanks for your kind visit.
regards
yashasvi
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romantic..all the best for the contest
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hi kookieswill
Welcome to my blogs dear,
thanks dear for your kind visit and wishes
Best Regards
Yashasvi
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very well written sir.all the best for the contest
regards
kookie
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