The contradictions and the opposition
The debate followed the introspection
In between my soul and my mind
Both entangled and entwined
In between the contradictory truths
The Truth which were still the worse lies
Swinging in between the dilemma of life
The wrestle and the eternal fight
The show of evil and Godly might
The Ever ending contradictions,
The never ending introspection
The futile debate in soul and mind
Life Morals Reality and Lies
In this disgraceful fight
No one wins but what I see
As I live thru these years
Its neither black nor white
What prevails is Gray’s might
Contradiction compromise
Debates subside
In His transcendental light
That I see thru at the other end
Where begins a new LIFE
My second attempt to see the two smoks as mind and soul debating about life... a peek into my introspection... the little bit of conscience or whatever is left in me...... AND as always, I fail to upload the pics for the contest.... my great computer system..... hope doc does not mind my handicap in loading the pics....
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hi Opulence,
second entry was as per Rajee Kushwaha's suggestion on alternative emotions
U likes them , I have my reward.... thats what that counts for me.....
If I have ur best wishes I am the luckiest one
yashasvi
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Yashji,
You should win the contest.
Two entries for the contest. Beautifully written.
Cheers,
Opulence.
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Raj ji
this is all your help and support that has helped me to expand
yashasvi
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hi Bhavna,
seee my struggle are so different... a struuggle to catch the glimpse of a beauty during my special "bird watching" during my morning waks and the other was to catch the white soul and distinguish it from the balck one in the maize of gray shadows...........
so different yet they survive in ame one mind...
MY computer... hahaha.... its a miracle that it works........ just like Indian democracy.....Lolzzzz..... well jokes apart, there are some official restriction on my office PC . And the connection I have at home is too slow to upload anything......
regards
yashasvi
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hi Maya,
thanks dear for the kind visit and comments
I dared to think and act differently... lets see the result of my off the track effort
regards
yashasvi
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hi Swayamji,
yeah the tussel is always there and it depends upon the sensivity of individual's inner self to feel it......
we all have the struggle going on, but many of have smothered our conscience....
nice to see you back
regards
yashasvi
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hi Rajee,
wrote this one when you commented on my last poem about ethereal unification ... your idea of alternative thoughts except LOVE for that pic gave me the basic idea about this poem
Please keep suggesting/commenting... you have helped me to bring out this one.......
regards
yashasvi
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hi Poonam ji,
yeah this was different and I was wondering my-self too... how this naughty mind could be philosophical... but then you never know the depths it can go......
thanks for your kind visit and I am sure you would give your suggestions for mprovement too
regards
yashasvi
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HI Raj ji,
the PIC for this poem can be found in Dr. Madhvi's contest 24.
My computer system is OLD enough to allow any pics to be uploaded.... (some official restriction type of problem)
thanks for your constant support and help
regards
yashasvi
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hi kookieswell
yeah this pic gave so many ideas, of love, , hate and spirituality...
waiting for your blog on this one
yashasvi
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